Group Crit.

• The Brain/tree/nerves system is interesting, continue exploring this further. Aesthetically I really like the maps that combine geometry and brain waves, nice colours. 
• Use of cropping and circle borders works well, contributes to a more impactful image. 
• I like the scientific approach- biological elements. 
• Collage with real medical images.
• Your interests in dark and creepy is evident in the nerovs system roughs. Can hear your tone of voice in this. 
• Tone and different textures of mark making using pencil , also think the photocopied images works well mixed with other materials. 
• Cool mark making , use of photocopied images in collage is interesting. 
• Form of shapes:
• Do you need to taper lines?
• How can you create more geometry?
• Straight edges and more symmetry?
• Really interested in collage/ shape interplay. Keep it graphic. 

Overall I am happy with the feed back, however I don't think that I will go down the line of photocopy collage because I have done this in projects before and I want to try something different. I like how the circled shapes and lines have gone down. But I do need to think about how I use line and shape more but I will experiment with that more in development work.By doing this I could uncover and new technique of mark making/ line and that would make my images more original and interesting.